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I wrote a short fiction story – it's a Greek re-telling called "Origins of Fire."
Here it is:
Prometheus snatched at the fire but Zeus held it aloft, toying with him.
“Not so fast, cousin. You’ve always had…
The best opening scenes in movie history — and why:
1/ The Dark Knight
No backstory. Just an insane villain executing a brilliant plan.
It makes you wonder who can stop him…
In 4 minutes, Kurt Vonnegut explained stories better than anyone I’ve ever heard.
“The shape of the curve is what matters. Not their origins.”
He plots stories on 2 axes:
X: Time
Y: Good fortune / ill fortune
He goes on to say,
“Somebody gets into trouble, then gets out of…
Students at NYU asked the creators of South Park the million-dollar question:
“What makes a good story?”
They gave one of the best explanations of story I’ve heard:
“If we can take the beats of your outline, and the words ‘and then’ belong between those beats… you got…
LeBron James is the NBA's first billion-dollar man.
He's earned $346M from NBA contracts and $700M from his off-court deals.
THREAD: LeBron's 7 best investments.
Jeff Bezos said:
“There is no way to write a six-page narratively structured memo and not have clear thinking.”
Here’s the writing framework Bezos uses (that you can too):
Harry Potter is the
#2
best-selling book of the last quarter century.
Only behind The Bible.
And JK Rowling used 1 storytelling framework for the entire series.
Here’s a breakdown:
Cut the fluff
Most people amble on in backstory for 10 minutes or write an intro paragraph.
This is a waste of time.
Find the interesting parts of your story, jump right to it, and provide as little backstory as possible.
I asked, “What is the single product that’s had the biggest impact on your health and wellness?”
I received 1,718 incredible replies.
Here are the 10 best:
Students at NYU asked the creators of South Park the million-dollar question:
“What makes a good story?”
They gave one of the best explanations of story I’ve heard:
“If we can take the beats of your outline, and the words ‘and then’ belong between those beats… you got…
A friend opened a restaurant in Madrid – it’s called Akiro and it’s on track to breakeven 7 months after opening, unheard of for a restaurant.
Talking with him last month, he says its success comes down to 3 things:
1. Foot traffic
He scoped out the entire city to find the…
In 4 minutes, Kurt Vonnegut explains stories better than anyone I’ve ever heard.
“The shape of the curve is what matters. Not their origins.”
He plots stories on 2 axes:
X: Time
Y: Good fortune / ill fortune
He goes on to say,
“Somebody gets into trouble, then gets out of it…
Up’s opening scene is notoriously sad.
Pixar decided to rip your heart out in the first 4 minutes of the movie.
But what makes it such an effective hook? Why is it the perfect opening?
Here’s a quick breakdown:
Start with the end in mind
What do you want the outcome of your story to be?
• Customer buying a product
• Friend laughing his ass off
• Investor giving you money
If you start with the end in mind, the intro and middle naturally funnel to that target.
Harry Potter is the
#2
best-selling book of the last quarter century.
Only behind The Bible.
And JK Rowling used 1 storytelling framework for the entire series.
Here’s a breakdown:
In 2011, Pixar employee Emma Coats shared its “22 Rules of Storytelling.”
They’re a masterclass in story, psychology, and human connection.
Here are 10 gems:
Make it emotional
People make decisions based on emotion.
But it’s impossible to make your audience feel everything.
Nail down 1-2 emotions and direct the entire story to amplify those.
I regularly refer to this chart from
@ShaanVP
:
Christopher Nolan doesn’t use detailed outlines.
Instead, he “draws shapes and diagrams and other structural things.”
Like this — the plot map Nolan used for Inception.
Here’s a breakdown:
Tesla is worth $725 Billion – more than 2x GM, Ford, and Toyota combined.
Yet Elon claims they’ve never spent a dollar on paid marketing.
But that’s not true — Tesla is running the most effective modern marketing campaign in history.
Here’s a breakdown:
The best closing scenes in movie history — and why:
1/ Inception
Cobb returns home to his fam.
But he spins his top. If it falls over, he’s back in the real world.
If it keeps spinning, he’s still in a dream.
The scene fades to black before we see what happens.
Christopher Nolan doesn’t write detailed outlines.
Instead, he “draws shapes and diagrams and other structural things” to keep the story on track.
Like this, the plot map Nolan used for Inception.
Let me explain...
In storytelling, the idea of structure is everywhere:
• 3…
In 2016, researchers at the University of Adelaide tested Kurt Vonnegut's theory that, "There’s no reason why the simple shapes of stories can’t be fed into computers."
They took the emotional arcs of 1300+ novels from Project Gutenberg, turned that into data, used modern tech…
I’ve spent 1000s of hours studying the top storytellers in the world.
People like Tolkien, Rowling and Gaiman.
Here’s what I learned:
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"What happens next?"
Neil Gaiman says you can sum up great storytelling with those 3 words.
They should be the first thing a reader (or…
In 2011, Pixar employee Emma Coats shared its “22 Rules of Storytelling.”
They’re a masterclass in story, psychology, and human connection.
Here are 10 gems:
Keep a story log
You have story-worthy moments every day but forget almost all of them. Simple fix:
• Create a two column spreadsheet (date and story)
• Before bed, take two minutes to write the best story from that day
You’ll start seeing stories everywhere.
Jeff Bezos said:
“There is no way to write a six-page narratively structured memo and not have clear thinking.”
Here’s the writing framework Bezos uses (that you can too):
8/ Up
Pixar decided to rip your heart out in the first 4 minutes of the movie.
It’s effective — if you can emotionally attach your audience and main character from the jump, you have a winning hook.
From here, the whole story is about Carl’s journey to regain his happiness.
In 2015, the former CEO of Formula 1 summed up the sport’s approach to marketing:
“I’d rather get the 70-year-old guy who’s got plenty of cash. So there’s no point trying to reach these kids.”
As great as that strategy sounds, it failed.
Then Liberty Media bought F1 in 2016……
3/ Baby Driver
The scene starts with movement and immediately raises questions:
• Who is this kid?
• Did he know about the bank robbery?
• Is he an accomplice or unsuspecting Uber driver?
The perfect song choice helps.
Structure your story
Humans gravitate to structure. Luckily there are tons to wrap around your story:
• Hero’s Journey
• StoryBrand
• Three Act
Here’s the structure JK Rowling used for the 5th Harry Potter:
The best opening scenes in movie history — and why:
1/ The Dark Knight
No backstory. Just an insane villain executing a brilliant plan.
Batman needs the Joker, not the other way around.
The Last Dance is the most-watched documentary in Disney history.
It averaged 5.6M viewers per episode and generated tens of millions in revenue — including $4M for Jordan himself.
Here’s a breakdown:
Most storytelling advice sucks.
So I crowdsourced tips from actual experts – Rowling, Nolan, and Jobs.
Here are 10 dead-simple tips to become a better storyteller:
Nike sells greatness, not clothes.
RedBull sells adrenaline, not drinks.
Polaroid sells memories and nostalgia, not cameras.
Shopify sells the dream of entrepreneurship, not websites.
The best brands sell stories, not things.
2/ The Godfather
Epic — but why? 3 things:
• Incredible opening hook, “I believe in America.”
• The dramatic camera pull back
• The shift in power from Bonasera to Vito
Plus the fantastic acting.
Up’s opening scene is notoriously sad.
Pixar decided to rip your heart out in the first 4 minutes of the movie.
But what makes it such an effective hook? Why is it the perfect opening?
Here’s a quick breakdown:
Raise the stakes
Apple realized the iPhone was competing on the same few features each release.
So it raised the stakes: privacy.
This tells two stories:
• Apple protects your privacy
• Competitors exploit your privacy
The story became a feature with iOS 14.5.
Use data intentionally
Numbers tell, stories sell.
But if used well, data backs up the story you’re telling.
I aim to use 1-3 high-impact data points to support my stories.
5/ The Lion King
That first “Ah Zebanya” hits hard with the sun rising at the same time.
Then there’s so much going on — lions roaring, birds chirping, and zebras running.
It’s the perfect introduction to the world before Simba is introduced over Pride Rock.
Talk to a niche
Great stories aren’t told to everyone.
They’re told to the specific group of people who will resonate most with them.
The idea of “1000 true fans.”
Harry Potter is the
#2
best-selling book of the last quarter century.
Only behind The Bible.
And JK Rowling used 1 storytelling framework for the entire series.
Here’s a breakdown:
Sell the transformation
Great storytelling boils down to the transformation the Hero goes through.
Nike never sells its clothing — it sells what the clothing can do for you.
“If you wear our stuff, you’ll jump like LeBron, run like Ronaldo, and hit like Serena.”
@TrungTPhan
Another fun Nolan fact:
He and Heath Ledger did all the makeup for the Joker instead of having pros do it
They wanted it to feel authentic, like the character was the one doing the makeup every day
Nail the hook
It doesn’t matter how incredible the rest of your story is if nobody sticks around for it.
A few guidelines:
• Punchy
• Short
• “Big if true”
Here’s the hook Steve Jobs used for the iPhone product launch:
Apple surpassed $3.5B in annual revenue from its ad network.
But it crushed FB, Snap, and 1000s of small businesses in the process.
How? By nailing the narrative that big tech threatens consumer privacy.
Here’s the breakdown 🧵
1. Nike
At the age of 18, a kid from Akron turned down a $10M check from Reebok.
• "I started thinking... if he's willing to give me a $10M check now, what if Nike or Adidas is willing to give me 20?"
A few months later, LeBron signed with Nike for $90M.
4/ Saving Private Ryan
Immediate tension.
You read June 6, 1944 and know these guys are in danger.
The boats crashing through the waves then build on the anticipation…
The first sound from a human is puking.
Mr. Beast is the most popular YouTuber in the world — he’s a young Walt Disney.
He uses what I call “Jenga Storytelling” in almost every vid.
He tells the audience the final outcome in the first 30 seconds.
Why does this work?
After the meeting, the memo owner makes edits and sends out a final version to all involved parties.
From everything I’ve read, it’s a heck of a task and really is required for all meetings.
To keep it consistent, Amazon uses 7 rules for writing its memos:
The Last Dance is the most-watched documentary in Disney history.
It averaged 5.6M viewers per episode and generated tens of millions in revenue.
But Jordan only made $4M – way below market value.
Here’s a breakdown:
Formula 1 is a $13 billion global behemoth.
But — until 2019 — it failed to crack the US market.
Then it launched Drive To Survive, the most effective content campaign in history.
Here’s a breakdown:
Legendary producer Rick Rubin gave a masterclass in creative thought on the Tim Ferriss pod.
10 lessons from Rick:
1/ “Most people equate work time with progress. That’s not always the case.”
On this day 2 years ago, I quit my job and moved to Madrid so my wife could get her MBA.
I was 25 and terrified to go solo.
But today, the little business I started brings in 5x more than I made in that job (which was a wonderful role), I write fiction ~3 hours per day, and get…
Neil Gaiman writes the first draft of every book by hand.
His reasoning is fascinating:
With a computer you “write that down and look at it and then fiddle with it.”
With a pen you “slow up a bit, but you’re thinking the sentence through to the end, and then you start…
It took me 2 years to become a decent writer.
The right resources would’ve saved me 1000s of hours (and $$$).
So…
I put a list together.
Here are 10 resources to 10x your writing (fast):
One of the biggest challenges in storytelling:
Highlighting and exaggerating emotion.
For the last 2 weeks, I’ve been editing the first draft of my book.
This “Feelings Wheel” has been open in a tab the entire time:
• 7 basic feelings
• 43 mid-level feelings
• 96 deep…
Robert McKee re-designed the marketing of:
• Nike
• HP
• Microsoft
To be centered around stories.
In 2013, he laid out his step-by-step process to create powerful brand narratives.
Here’s a breakdown:
Game of Thrones is one of the most popular shows ever.
But its last season scored a 55% on Rotten Tomatoes and went down as one of the most-hated finales in TV history.
That turned out to be a good thing for the new release, House of the Dragon…
Here’s a breakdown:
6/ Get Out
“Hedge maze out here.” — Andre is tense, and you feel it with him.
Then the car slowly rolls up behind him.
The tension skyrockets.
An unknown man abducts Andre.
Impossible not to watch the rest of the movie.
7/ Star Wars: A New Hope
It jumps right into the action — a massive spaceship chasing a smaller, helpless one.
C-3PO feels helpless.
Then comes the villain.
The breathing, the all black outfit juxtaposed to the all white ship.
Vader is a badass — who can stop him?
Bookstores are incredible. You’re surrounded by hundreds of ideas and stories that started as a small spark in someone else’s mind that they then spent thousands of hours translating to the written word. Impossible not to feel inspired.
Serena Williams has:
• 39 Grand Slam titles
• $94M+ in career prize money
THREAD: How a girl from Compton, California became the best tennis player ever.
One way to become a better writer:
Take your favorite author. Find their best work.
Copy it, word for word. Do it by hand.
It's called copywork.
This morning, I copied page 11 of George Saunders' A Swim in a Pond in the Rain.
But why go through the hand cramps? Why spend 20…