Screenwriter, producer, artist(?), all around good guy
2 Players Required
The Undoing
Lucid
The Rickety Man
VASC Winner
Killer Shorts Finalist
📍Upstate NY
Surprise drop!
Horror short I wrote and produced last fall, IT VISITS ME, is now available to watch!
A distressed woman takes refuge with her religiously-minded sister, who warns her she could be visited by an angel in the night...
Life is short. Your screenplay should be too.
400 pages--that's...c'mon guys
180 pages--seriously?
120 pages--does it REALLY need all those pages?
110 pages--we're getting there
100 pages--what you cut will make this stronger
90 pages--you beautiful, mad monster
In exactly 24 hours we begin filming a new horror short, LUCID. In addition to writing it, I will be acting as script supervisor, a role I've never done or seen done in real life. I've given myself as much education as I could. I hope I don't screw it up (I will & that's ok).
So, a cool thing happened to me yesterday.
I signed my first feature shopping agreement!
I'm grateful to all the people who made it happen. I'm proud of the script that caught the producers' eyes. It's a risky one, but the producers see potential.
And that's pretty neat 😊
Most people have no idea how much mental energy it takes to write a screenplay. No idea how much effort of will it takes to construct something with such a limiting, rigid format, yet make it look and read like you're in the dark staring at a screen.
It's a true marvel.
Alright, writers, it's time to drop your most bad-ass* screenplay titles in here.
Even if they aren't real titles.
But bonus points if they are and you have a completed script for it.
*bad-ass is a subjective determination
The easiest way to write a script is to envision it on the screen in your mind, rewrite it a few dozen times, then spend as long as you need to write it out on the page, then rewrite that a few times, then get feedback and do some more rewrites, all the while doubting yourself.
I don't believe in writer's block.
I think it's fear.
You fear writing poorly. Or you don't know how to perfectly express what you have in your heart.
You fear missing the mark.
You must master this fear.
Write through it
The fear will pass.
Only you will ever know.
Jason Blum has two rules he lives by when responding to a script:
1. Respond quickly.
2. Chalk it up to personal taste.
"If you say you personally don’t like something, no one can argue with that. Sadly, most of Hollywood doesn’t pass like this and it drives me bananas.”
AMEN
I'm incredibly proud to share w/you our new
#horror
short, LUCID!
Produced / Directed by
@visuals_black
Produced / Written by moi
Produced by
@pooh_yay
Thanks to an amazing cast and crew who helped bring this to life. Go! Watch it! Tell your friends!
This morning I wrote THE END on one of two feature scripts I've been working on the past two months.
Feels good.
Going to celebrate writing it tonight with some wine and pizza.
OMGRRRRR whatttt
Amazing news!
The little film that could! Thank you, backers! Thank you cast! Thanks to the crew! And to my partners-in-crime
@pooh_yay
and
@visuals_black
CONGRATULATIONS!
The Black List and contest readers should be trained not to leave comments like, "I can't see how you could sustain this for an entire season."
It's insulting to the writer. It isn't constructive. A reader's limited imagination shouldn't be the benchmark for judging quality.
There is no one right way to write a screenplay.
There are more right ways to write a screenplay than wrong ones.
Don't worry about what's right. Just write. It'll be alright.
#WritingTips
Shoutout to everyone who is writing today, who wrote this week, who haven't seen one dime and keep writing anyway and keep seeing no response in their inbox and keep getting rejected and keep putting words on the page anyway and keep going because you can't not.
You're seen.
Plot isn't everything. Sometimes you gotta let things breathe.
Moving forward in the plot at the expense of a good, quiet, character-building moment can be fatal.
A film happened because a group of people came together to overcome a unique, difficult, expensive challenge (a whole series of them). They pushed through, created something magical.
A true communal effort.
No matter how bad the movie--it's still a miracle.
@thisisandrewc
Ain't this the truth. Talent--it's EVERYWHERE.
Inspiring, but good to know you can't just skate through and expect to make it--you are competing against some amazing people. And that's a beautiful thing.
WRITING TIP:
Read your writing out loud.
Do voices for the characters you've created.
But also read the action lines like you'd want to be read to.
If it doesn't sound natural, if it is hard to say, if it sucks...
...rewrite it.
#Screenwriters
who are stuck--what do you need to get unstuck? Would a 30 minute voice chat help? Or an email? What can I do to help you overcome inertia, story problems, fear, or feelings of inadequacy?
Seriously--reply or DM me! I am here to help.
#WritingCommunity
#PreWGA
Craft always comes in service to the emotion. Never the reverse.
Emotion connects humans to each other and to ourselves. If you aren't reaching your audience emotionally, it won't matter how fundamentally sound your writing is.
MAKE PEOPLE FEEL.
Something you may not know, but reading your work aloud vastly improves effectiveness of your rewriting.
You're going to hear (and see!) stuff you don't see when you're reading silently.
It's b/c you're using a totally different part of your brain.
Beginning rewrite of a script I love. New version of the story.
Good news is I pitched to producers and director, and got their sign-off.
Bad news is it's a blank page rewrite.
Good news is I freaking love writing.
Let's go.
#amwriting
#screenwriting
Almost 6 months ago I was tapped to work on a movie project w/two extremely talented writers and filmmakers. As of last week, things are finally moving forward. I'm beyond excited to be a very small part of this project. I can't wait to share more about it in the coming months.
I felt uncomfortable sharing earlier this week, but I feel okay celebrating today.
I finished and turned in the latest revision of a freakin' fun and gory western horror script to producers and director.
I'm really proud of this draft and the work I put into making it click. 😎
Filling out SAG paperwork makes things even more real.
Things are coming together quickly. Got an actor lined up and a possible line on an actress.
Location and budget are locked. Shoot dates are scheduled. It's happening!
#corkscrewshort
I have not had much time to write, but I've been reading a lot of scripts lately (7 pilots + 3 features in the last two weeks, and two more features in the bullpen). I wanted to post a thread about some observations I've made, and maybe this will help in your writing and reading:
Someone recently told me they thought they weren't a good storyteller because they with every script they wrote, something was wrong or incomplete--that they weren't able to tell the story they wanted.
1/
You don't have to be a genius (I'm certainly not) to write a good script. But you do have to be disciplined and diligent and committed.
I'll take committed and diligent over superstar with no follow-through any day of the week.
Thinking of doing a transparent-as-I-can-without-violating-confidentiality dive into my experience receiving notes from producers on a script I wrote and what I did to address them.
Not sure how exactly I'd do it on here. But, any interest in that if I can figure it out?
I may be outing myself as a Bad Writer™ but how in the heck do you all have time to watch all the media you watch?
I don't genuinely understand how you have time.
I can officially say I have a complete first draft of GODHAND (sci-fi/horror)!
112 pages
Written in just under 5 weeks, primarily between 4-7am and weekends.
Written to be covid-friendly (mostly) while not feeling covid-y.
10 primary / 7 minor roles
To you wild and wooly writers and creators out there--screenwriters, novelists, essayists, poets--
Take a night off. Celebrate breathing. Life isn't just writing. Spend time with loved ones. Drink a fine glass of sparkling water, feel the spicy fizz bubbles up your nose. Smile.
SMARTER PEOPLE
Never pass up the opportunity to talk craft w/people smarter than you.
Different people are smarter about different things. Find the experts in various aspects of screenwriting. Engage them.
Learn from them.
Today, The Undoing comes out.
It's a 5-minute short film, has an incredible cast, amazing direction, and the sound design is impeccable. In short, I'm so proud of the work we put into it, and I want to share it with you.
10am ET.
You go back in time to when you were 18 years old.
You have three seconds to tell your 18 year-old self three words before you're whisked back to today.
What would you tell yourself?
Great screenwriting
uses the least # of words
to paint most expressive images in a reader's mind
and makes them feel SOMETHING
while laying down plot
in a format that approximates what should show on screen
and presents characters
that other people desperately want to be.
MAGIC
So, until the time is right, let it go.
Until you are at peace with your mission, let it go.
Do not work so hard. Rather, work at ease.
Come back to it when you are less encumbered.
You'll return. That giant will be small.
It will fly. And so will you.
We shot a short film in January. Released it April 1.
Nearly 60,000 views later, we are beyond blessed by every single person who watched and commented and supported us. THANK YOU! 🙏
Now, we're making it into a feature. We hope you'll be up for watching a badass, scary, film!
A few days ago I typed THE END on another feature, my 4th this year.
I wrote it for my wife Emily who wanted a screenplay for her birthday that combined the hot heat of THE WARRIORS with the slick meta-humor of SCREAM, flavored with early 80's horror and punk/rock music movies.
Last 3 months I:
✅ Co-wrote pilot w/
@Clingempeel
+ revised 2x
✅ Did blank-page horror feature rewrite
✅ Set up film production LLC
✅ Produced a
#horror
short film based on a script I wrote
✅ Wrote and began revising feature based on that produced short
I'm pumped for 2022!
I had a pretty amazing meeting with producers today on this horror script that I love so much it kind of hurts.
It's been a LONG journey, and there's still more road ahead.
But the inches are happening.
#screenwriter
retreat. New England. Reasonable entry fee (TBD). Need-based grants available.
Workshops & "Panels." Group sessions. Solo coaching. Communal meals. Primo lodging. Did I mention New England?
Reply if you'd be into this idea
#MakingPlans
#WritingCommunity
#PreWGA
Not sure if this link will change, but I can now announce ATTICUS was one of three winners of this year's Virginia Screenwriting Competition!
Thank you
@VAFilmOffice
and
@VaFilmFest
It's a business and an art, this screenwriting thing. Please don't mistake the two. And don't inflate the importance of one over the other. That way lies madness and sadness and unemployment.
Be wise. Know your craft. Say less than you know. Smile. Be polite. Treat people well.
Pitch deck should be producer's job. It should come into play when packaging or finding $$. If you're a producer and need/want a pitch deck from a writer just to "see" the story, you shouldn't be producing.
Don't ask/expect writers to do decks unless you're offering to pay them.
This.
I HATE making pitch decks.
I'm a writer, let me TELL you what the story is. Don't make me have to create a picture book for you to flick through.
I'm 10 pages away from completing the first feature I've tackled since THE SCOURGE two years ago. I started writing this one three weeks ago, mostly written between 4 and 6am.
Is it good? Not yet. But there are germs of incredible possibilities in it.
My screenwriting kryptonite is Structure. I'm an intuitive writer, and sometimes (a lot of times) my beats don't land quite where structure fetishists say they should.
Sometimes, the critiques are right on the money. 🎯
Other times, I secretly disagree. 🤨