@SteveMartinToGo
In high school, I wrote a short story for the graduation test. I don’t remember anything about the story, period.
I do remember the grading. 4 professors read and gave their opinion.
3 out of 4 took off points for repetition of words.
The fourth saw the point, and added…
@LittleMsNullity
@SteveMartinToGo
Academic literary criticism is worthy of scorn.
Thornton Melon (Back To School,1986) has to write a paper on Kurt Vonnegut, tried to read his books, "… I can't understand a word of it."
"So who is going to write the paper for you … ?"
@LittleMsNullity
@SteveMartinToGo
IT's all about re-thinking and the lasting impact of words on someone.
I appreciate your story, and I wonder if you could ever share with the 4th person what it truly meant to you! 🤔
Words can leave a lasting impression, we need to choose them wisely
Have a wonderful Sunday
@DoPauln
@SteveMartinToGo
Thank you!
Unfortunately, back then and possibly still now, the grading professors were made to be anonymous.
They were at least Human though. 😉
@LittleMsNullity
@SteveMartinToGo
I remember having an English teacher who did the same! She said by no means repeating words was okay, not even if you're writing a character's stream of thought. So sad she was sticking so hard to the rules!
@CaritoBarbera19
@SteveMartinToGo
I mean, I agree with you. But try and remember that everyone has their own opinions on different writing styles.
Just makes it complicated when it’s the person who gives you a grade. 🤣😉
@LittleMsNullity
@SteveMartinToGo
I still remember the second grade teacher who marked up my paper in red ink because I spelled “of course” correctly at age 7. She thought it was spelled “of coarse.” My mom told me I was right but did not dare tell the teacher. That’s how it used to be in the old days.
@Susannah_Bryan
@SteveMartinToGo
I find myself often in situations similar in real life. I notice things, say nothing but move on knowing I’m in the right.
Keep it to myself and move on. 😉
@LittleMsNullity
@SteveMartinToGo
What an absurd rule given that Joyce specifically honed a technique on repetition of words ‘falling softly …softly falling’ in his short story masterpiece The Dead.
@LittleMsNullity
@SteveMartinToGo
I just read a short story Melanctha by Gertrude Stein that Hemingway said influenced Farewell to Arms - “she had also discovered many truths about rhythms and the use of words in repetition that were valid and valuable”